Please state your opinion as your topic sentence. Then provide several convincing supporting details to support your topic sentence. Evidence from online websites that provide statistics and numbers would be great. As always, check for spelling, punctuation, and proper grammar!
Should school officials like teachers, administrators, and staff members be able to go through your belongings without your permission? Yes or no? And why?
Please state your opinion as your topic sentence. Then provide several convincing supporting details to support your topic sentence. Evidence from online websites that provide statistics and numbers would be great. As always, check for spelling, punctuation, and proper grammar!
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Mason
2/18/2015 05:50:04 am
No I do not think the school administraders should have the right to go through your stuff without permission. I think this because some things you have might be embarrassing to you and you don't want people to see. Another reason I think this is because it is evading your personal space, and that to me seems wrong.
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moneyman ca$h
2/18/2015 05:50:07 am
I think schools shouldn't go through your stuff. I think schools shouldn't go through your stuff because it is a place for your privises. I think schools shouldn't go through your stuff because they might stell your stuff.
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Annabelle
2/18/2015 05:59:36 am
I think that you should not do that in middle school or in elementary school. I think this because all of us are still younger and would probably not bring anything bad to school. Also many students carry private things in there backpacks so it would not be appropriate to that without permission. But I think it could be done but only in high-school, where it would be more dangerous for a student and the students around them if they brought something to school.
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Matt #Paperclip Chain
2/18/2015 06:22:31 am
I think the teacher should not be able to look in a personal area. What if he looks in someones backpack before school and finds a diary or something and reads while they are at recess. Another thing that would be kinda creepy it would be like grab my...somethings not in here, then they look at the teacher and he has a creepy smile. What if you have something for your store in your backpack that you worked for hours on and he's all like this isn't important and breaks it. I think that teachers should not be aloud to look in someones backpack because they don't know what could be in there.
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Cassidy
2/18/2015 06:25:31 am
I think that staff shouldn't be able to look through other people's stuff without permission.
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Ryan
2/18/2015 06:37:13 am
I say no in elementary school but in middle school yes. Why in middle school and not elementary. well middle school has a lot of older kids that think different from elementary kids and an elementary kid would less likely bring a gun or something bad to school. But a middle school kid would have a higher chance of bringing something bad to school . so yes in middle school they should have an administers to check in back packs or lockers and in elementary school no.
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Aidan
2/18/2015 08:40:21 am
I like how you stated that you should in middle school, but shouldn't in elementary school. I never thought of that.
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24+8#***JAKE***#4+26
2/18/2015 06:53:56 am
I think it depends on what they are looking for. They should go through your stuff if they are looking for bad stuff like bombs or animals or guns. But they shouldn't do it if they are looking through personal stuff like phones, books, homework and diaries. But overall I think it isn't ok but I still think a little bit it is ok. That is why I think BOTH they can or can not look in your stuff.
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AndrewKnight
2/18/2015 07:27:53 am
I don't think that people should be looking in your personal belongings and do that to other people around the school. One of my reasons is that they could steal that or look at an object that's personal or something that only you would see. When you go in someone personal space it's considered to be illegal to invad someone's teratory.
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I'M BATMAN SAID MALACHI
2/18/2015 07:43:37 am
I think they should look through kids back packs because if the student has a knife or any weapon they can hurt or even kill other people like when my cousin accidentally brought a knife to school he got told on and he was in this big mess and it all started because nobody checked. So this is my thinking and I hope you liked it.
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iris
2/18/2015 09:33:43 am
I disagree because what if you have personal belongings in there that you don't wan't other people seeing? Just a thought.
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Kaleb:)
2/18/2015 07:48:39 am
I think that school administrators should not be able to go through your belongings without your permission. I think that it is invading your privacy and you might have something important that you do not want to share. I also think that students should be trusted to do the right thing and not bring things to school that they are not supposed to.
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Kimberly
2/18/2015 07:49:50 am
I say that teachers shouldn't go through kid's backpacks without them knowing because they could have money or something that is valuable to go missing. I also do think police can go through kid's backpacks cause they could be looking for something bad. Teachers should not go through kid's backpacks because the kid could have put something in there that they need and the teacher could take it out or have it fall out of the backpack and then it can get thrown away by somebody different. Police can go through backpacks because they might be looking for a drug or something that can hurt other people around the area.
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Ava dragon
2/18/2015 08:07:07 am
I think that teachers should not go through your stuff because you can have something in there that is really personal or you may have something important in there and they can just throw it away and that it your privet property and it could be non of their business so that would make them nosy and you can also have something that is a secret about yourself and I don't think you would be wanting someone looking at your stuff.
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Gisselle
2/18/2015 08:13:29 am
Yes because what about if a child brought something bad? For example, they could have brought a weapon, or drugs, or maybe they have violent writing.
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Grace
2/18/2015 08:15:39 am
I think that staff, administrators, and teachers should not look through your locker. I think this because there might be personal stuff in it that you don't want anyone to see. Also, students shouldn't look through your locker for the same reasons. They could make fun of you for what you have in your locker. This is why people shouldn't look through your locker.
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Hannah#24
2/18/2015 08:22:00 am
I think that school administrators should not be able to go through your belongings for 1 main reason. First, I think that they should not be able to go through your belongings because what if you had something personal in your belongings I am sure you don't want the to see it.
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Nolan
2/18/2015 08:28:24 am
I think they should not go through your back pack.Cause would if that person has something that is personal to you,and they tacke all of it.Also it is probaly going to effect you by hurting you or making you sad.
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Aidan
2/18/2015 08:38:12 am
I do not think that people should be allowed to check your backpacks for any items. If you are at school, and a staff member comes by and picks up your backpack and starts to rummage through the contents, would you be offended? I would, because if I had some personal things in the bag, I would definitely not want someone to freely look at them. There is also the possibitity that the person looking through the bag is using the opportunity to find things such as addresses or phone numbers, to use them to find you. This is probably not very common, but it could happen.
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Katie dog
2/18/2015 09:15:39 am
I think that you should not be able to gothrough someone elses belonginng at school. You have no idea what could be in there there could be somethng really personle to that person. Maybe it could also be a good thing also because if a teacher goses through someones stuff yes they are invading someone space but they could find stuff there not suppost to have. In our school for instance someone might have gum :-(. But if you go through some ones stuff and you find something that is worth alot to them maybe a pichture of someone that had passed that the person whould not want to talk about if the teacher wanted to talk about it. Also if you have a phone or somthing in your backpack and who ever is going through your back pack and finds it they could do some thing to it like make a passsword so you can't get in or look through all your pictures and then start taking slefies of them. In conclution I think that going through someones space is not good it can be good in some cases but you shouldent have been going through the persns stuff from the first place.
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Preston
2/18/2015 09:41:59 am
Yes, I personally think that the schools administrators should be alowed to search your back pack or locker in elementary and up especially middle and high school. I think it is okay because you never know who might do something bad especially the people who are the least likely to do something bad when it is the least expected. For example the high school my uncle used to go to had a terrorist in it that he knew was caught last year.
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IRIS has an opinion too!
2/18/2015 09:43:57 am
I don't think that administrators or teachers should be allowed to go through your backpacks or lockers ext. because lots of people bring there personal belongings to school, and if you asked me I seriously do NOT like people going through my stuff. Plus, I think its just plain rude!✔
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Janessa
2/18/2015 10:15:45 am
I don't think anyone be allowed to rummage through your things unless you want them to. If someone was always looking through my stuff I'd call it an invasion of privacy! They could find something important and think it's junk. Also, someone could find something special and silently laugh at it or take it apart while he or she observes it. This is why I think we should not let people look through our stuff while when we are at recess or class.
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Jaidyn (i was batman FIRST!)
2/18/2015 10:43:29 am
i think that teachers should not be able to go through kids personal belongings. Okay so think of your property and it is a property would you like some one walking on your grass and parking in your drive way because of a party. Another thing is like what if you have your tablet and you where using it during class and your teacher had suspicions and they took for the day.
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Ethan
2/18/2015 12:08:43 pm
Yes I would say yes because there might be a kid who might have some problems and might have brought a we on to school if teachers were to find this they could confiscate the weapon and could talk to that student aND resolve the problem and it might not be a weapon it could be something that would be distracting to that student that's why I think it would be a food idea for teachers to be able to look through that students personal things.
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Herman aka super man
2/18/2015 12:50:57 pm
I think teachers and administers should not go through students stuff! One, it might be embarrassing and make some kids life miserable. Two, they might get into something really private in their backpacks. Three, the student may be really shy and not like to share private things. Four, our backpacks are our property and we should be able to decide you gets into them.
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Kailyn
2/18/2015 01:14:43 pm
Yes, because what if a student brought a weapon to school to harm someone. Even if it is just a toy, they could still harm someone with it. Also you could get arrested and start a record. Next, your parents will ask you what you put in your backpack and you can't lie to your parents, can you. In conclusion, teachers should look in student's backpacks for the safety of the other students.
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Bevan #11 #stayawayfrompeoplesprivacy
2/18/2015 01:44:40 pm
I think no they shouldn't be able to because if you have personal items or embarrassing things then people would find it. Yet of they don't look at private notes or little things and only big and dangerous weapons or other items than it might be okay.
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Chance
2/18/2015 10:28:07 pm
My opinion is that teachers should not be allowed to go through your belongings because what if there is something you don't want them to look at or if it is private and it also is their own property. That is what I think for my opinion that teachers should not be allowed in your belongings and private property.
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Daniel
2/18/2015 11:42:03 pm
No because sometimes you have personal things that you don't want people seeing.yes because sometimes you have bad stuff in you kicker and they at least need to check.in conclusion I think No.
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